IOC more like please dont make me do more practice iocs

I'm not really sure how to attach the selection that I had, but it was the one about Offred and Serena Joy meeting while Serena is knitting and Offred has one of her obnoxious flashbacks to her mom.

Anyways, here's me grading myself:

Criterion A: 4
The text is referenced often in the IOC, and the comments are generally backed up by references to the text. However, arguments are generally unclear, and are not very well developed. The references to the text are somewhat underdeveloped, with many being only superficial.

Criterion B: 2
Literary features are barely referenced, and the arguments that are made using them are poorly developed.

Criterion C: 1
General ideas are grouped together, but there is little to no coherent structure to the commentary, and this detracts from a large amount of meaning that could appear in the argument.

Criterion D: 3
Language used is appropriate to the IOC and there are few mistakes in grammar and sentence structure. However, it is not particularly accurate or clear.